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2013-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1. They found some golf balls. He lost them yesterday. -> They found some golf balls which he lost yesterday. 2. We spoke to the lady. She sold the magazines to us. -> We spoke to the lady whe sold the magazines to us. 3. I have a friend. His brother works in the Customs Office. -> I have a friend whoes brother works in the Customs Office. 4. We went to a wedding. The wedding took place at the bride's house. -> We wnet to a wedding that took plcce at the bride's house. 5. Let me introduce you to the woman. Her daughter won first prize in the cooking contest. -> Let me introduce you to the woman whose daugher won first prize in the cooking contest. Nowadays, There is a novelist whom I like very much. The novelist is Kim Junghuk. I knew him from the Podcast that informs the books of me. He is inarticulate in his speech but he speak well and he is very humorous. I am very happy when I listen the podcast that he broadcast and I read his books.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Sorry for I am late sending your composition. Please bare with me because I have had marathon classes. Oh nice! Tell me something about him tomorrow. Anyway, sleep well and good night! -Teacher Chloe 1. They found some golf balls. He lost them yesterday.-> They found some golf balls which he lost yesterday. >>Correct!2. We spoke to the lady. She sold the magazines to us.-> We spoke to the lady whe sold the magazines to us.>>Correct!3. I have a friend. His brother works in the Customs Office.-> I have a friend whoes brother works in the Customs Office.>>Correct! >>I have a friend whosebrother works in the Customs Office.4. We went to a wedding. The wedding took place at the bride\'s house.-> We wnet to a wedding that took plcce at the bride\'s house.>>We went to a wedding which took place at the bride\'s house.5. Let me introduce you to the woman. Her daughter won first prize in the cooking contest.-> Let me introduce you to the woman whose daugher won first prize in the cooking contest.>>Correct!Nowadays, There is a novelist whom I like very much. >>Nowadays, there is a novelist who I like very much. The novelist is Kim Junghuk. >>Correct! >>He is Kim Junghuk. I knew him from the Podcast that informs the books of me. >>I knew him from podcast which informs me about my book. He is inarticulate in his speech but he speak well and he is very humorous. >>He is inarticulate in his speech but he speaks well and humorously. I am very happy when I listen the podcast that he broadcast and I read his books. >>Correct!

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