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Q: What is the best quality you've inherited from either of your parents?
I've inherited many things from my parents. My face and personality are similar to my parent's. Especially, my father and I are both diligent. My father usually wakes up at 5 a.m. and goes his office. He always does his best. I, too, get up in the morning early. I study hard and try to do somthing perpectly. Also, I have responsibility and diligence.
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Hi there [이름].
A very nice composition.
Very nice grammar and line of thought.
I think most girls really take after their fathers.
See you later.
T.Maria^^
Q: What is the best quality you\'ve inherited from either of your parents?I\'ve inherited many things from my parents.
>> Correct
My face and personality are similar to my parent\'s.
>> Correct
Especially, my father and I are both diligent.
>> Especially that both my father and I are diligent.
My father usually wakes up at 5 a.m. and goes his office.
>> My father usually wakes up at 5 am and goes to his office.
He always does his best.
>> Correct
I, too, get up in the morning early.
>> Correct^^
I study hard and try to do somthing perpectly.
>> I study hard and try to do somethings perfectly.
Also, I have responsibility and diligence.
>> Correct
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