homework
학생이 쓴 원문
what is your paradise?
My paradise? Maybe It's my home.
In my home, I can read books and take a rest without any interferences. If I'm sleey, I ca go to bed. It's the best place where I'll do with my own. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Surely, home is a real paradise for you!
^^ But I was expecting a longer composition.
Anyway, good job!
- Teacher Grace
My paradise?
>>Correct
Maybe it's my home.
>>Correct
In my home, I can read books and take a rest without any interferences.
>> At home, I can read books and take a rest without any interference.
If I'm sleepy, I ca go to bed.
>>Correct
It's the best place where I'll do with my own. ^^
>> It’s the best place where I can do my own stuff.
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