HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I left early because I had to arrive at the downtown. And then, I had to find
a place to stay until tomorrow.
So, I could't afford to get along with them until late.
2. It was very expensive, but I really desired to buy it. It seemed to be very useful for me. In order to get it by myself, I had to work harder than now.
3. They never come on time, so it's okay to start the party without them.
But, we can eat a cake as soon as they come here.
4. There was a train strike, so it wasn't possible to go there by a train or any subway also. We were obliged to take a bus.
5. I'll do it when she call me. She makes me high, and I feel that I can do everything when I'm with her, see her, or hear her.
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강사 첨삭
Hi! How are you? Hmm, very good sentences! I love it! (^_^) Give yourself a pat on the back. I\'m fascinated with your improvement everyday. In learning English you have to use it whenever you can, it\'s as simple as that. Good night and Keep yourself motivated everyday! (^_^)
-Teacher Rose-
1. I left early because I had to arrive at the downtown. And then, I had to find a place to stay until tomorrow. So, I could\'t afford to get along with them until late.>> Correct2. It was very expensive, but I really desired to buy it. It seemed to be very useful for me. In order to get it by myself, I had to work harder than now.>> It was very expensive, but I really desire to buy it. It seemed to be very useful for me. In order to get it by myself, I have to work harder than now.3. They never come on time, so it\'s okay to start the party without them.But, we can eat a cake as soon as they come here.>> Correct4. There was a train strike, so it wasn\'t possible to go there by a train or any subway also. We were obliged to take a bus.>> Correct5. I\'ll do it when she call me. She makes me high, and I feel that I can do everything when I\'m with her, see her, or hear her.>> Correct
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