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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Ms kathrine!
Are you fine? I hate to have a cold.
If I have a cold, I can't speak as throat swelled up and I can't do anything as fever and dizziness.
Anyway I wish you a speedy recovery.
Q : Do you believe that there is a secret which could remain unrevealed forever?
Wow..How did you come up with the question? It make me hard. I have not been ever think about that. Also I don't know how can I say about that in Korean. How about your opinion?
Actually, I don't like to make a secret. Becase If I have a secret, I will think about it all the time and I will be afraid for being caught that by someone.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Thanks for your concern.
And don\'t worry I will be fine.
Thanks for answering your composition though it\'s very hard for you to answer it.
Nonetheless, in your composition today.
You should explain you side very well.
And whether we open a secret or not, it is our own prerogative. We all have our own conscience either to reveal it or not.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello Ms kathrine!
>> correct! (**capitalization)Are you fine?
>> correct!
I hate to have a cold.
>> I hate having colds. If I have a cold, I can\'t speak as throat swelled up and I can\'t do anything as fever and dizziness.
>> If I have a cold, I can\'t speak because my throat is swelling and I can\'t do anything ebcause I have a fever and I feel dizzy. Anyway I wish you a speedy recovery. >> correct
Q : Do you believe that there is a secret which could remain unrevealed forever?Wow..How did you come up with the question?
>> correct!
It make me hard.
>> It makes me hard to answer.
I have not been ever think about that.
>> I have not ever thought about that.
Also I don\'t know how can I say about that in Korean.
>> correct!
>> OR: I also don\'t know what to say about that in Korean.
How about your opinion?
>> correct!Actually, I don\'t like to make a secret.
>> correct!
Becase If I have a secret, I will think about it all the time and I will be afraid for being caught that by someone.
>> Because if I have a secret, I will think about it all the time and I will be afraid to be caught by that someone.
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