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I think it's not true that if someone says he/she can see the future. I think destiny exists but human cannot see it. I believe that there's a God living somewhere and he already made the destinies of everyone. After living 20 years, I think believing God and destiny makes me feel comfortable for every troubles I have. Anyway, about the opinion about fortune telling, even though I think there's destiny, a man's so-called 'fortune telling' is just a lie. How can they know it? I have already been seen many fortune tellers who told me wrong things. Maybe they can assume some right informations but I think it's just by their observation of people or good sense of prediction. Their prediction isn't by seeing the future things. I have an experience. When I was studying a very big exam to enter universities, one of fortune teller told me that I wouldn't get good grade on my exam but I got my highest score on the exam. So, in conclusion, I cannot believe it.
This was a hard topic to answer.
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Hey there!It was very nice talking to you again!I think that you\'re opinion about fortune tellers is a very interesting one.Especially since you already had an experience with one.It\'s good to know that you didn\'t let yourself be affected by what the fortune teller told you.Always take care of yourself okay?See you on our next class.t. Erine I think it\'s not true that if someone says he/she can see the future.
>>I think it\'s not true when someone says he/she can see the future.
or >>I think that I won\'t believe someone who says he/she can see the future.I think destiny exists but human cannot see it.>>I think destiny exists but humans cannot see it.I believe that there\'s a God living somewhere and he already made the destinies of everyone.>>CORRECT!After living 20 years, I think believing God and destiny makes me feel comfortable for every troubles I have.>>After living for 20 years, I think believing in God and destiny makes me feel comfortable for every trouble I have.Anyway, about the opinion about fortune telling, even though I think there\'s destiny, a man\'s so-called \'fortune telling\' is just a lie.>>Anyway, my opinion about fortune telling, even though I think there\'s destiny, a man\'s so-called \'fortune telling\' is just a lie.How can they know it?>>CORRECT!I have already been seen many fortune tellers who told me wrong things.>>I have already seen many fortune tellers who told me wrong things.Maybe they can assume some right informations but I think it\'s just by their observation of people or good sense of prediction.>>Maybe they guess some right information but I think it\'s just by their observation of people or good sense of prediction.Their prediction isn\'t by seeing the future things.>>CORRECT!I have an experience.>>I had an experience.When I was studying a very big exam to enter universities, one of fortune teller told me that I wouldn\'t get good grade on my exam but I got my highest score on the exam. >>When I was studying for a very big entrance exam, one of the fortune tellers told me that I wouldn\'t get a good grade on my exam but I got my highest score on the exam.So, in conclusion, I cannot believe it.>>In conclusion, I do not believe it.This was a hard topic to answer. >>CORRECT
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