Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Ms. [Name].
I must do the homework in work time. But I was busy, so I can't.
Now, the work is finished and I should go to the boxing class.
I should speedly do homework, so my answer may be short.
Anyway, Good afternoon, Good night and see you tommrow.
Q : Can you remember the dream you've had that you wish real?
At some moment, my dream disappered in my life. When I was a child, I had many dreams. When I went to the balet calss, I dreamed to be a bellerina. When I read a book about Nightingale, I wish to become a nurse.
Now, I wish to get my own house to live with my family and a cuty dog. And I want to buy two bildings in Gangnam, Seoul to plan for my later years. Oh my... Where is my beatiful dream?
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Great evening to you!
Thanks for still posting your thoughts here.
Though you said you had many dreams, maybe because it was many that is why you were confused before.
And that is why you were not able to choose which one do you like.
Is it?
hehe.. ^^
Anway, I will see you tomorrow.
Have a good night sleep!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello Ms. [Name].
>> correct!I must do the homework in work time.
>> correct!
But I was busy, so I can\'t.>> correct!Now, the work is finished and I should go to the boxing class.
>> correct!
>> OR: Now, I just finished my work and I should go to the boxing club. I should speedly do homework, so my answer may be short.>> I should do the homework fast so my answer is may be short.
Anyway, Good afternoon, Good night and see you tommrow.
>> Anyway, good afternoon, good night and I\'ll see you tomorrow. Q : Can you remember the dream you\'ve had that you wish real?At some moment, my dream disappered in my life.
>> correct!
When I was a child, I had many dreams.
>> correct!
When I went to the balet calss, I dreamed to be a bellerina.
>> When I went to a ballet class, I dreamt of beco[이름]g a ballerina.
When I read a book about Nightingale, I wish to become a nurse.
>> correct!Now, I wish to get my own house to live with my family and a cuty dog.
>> Now, I wish to get my own house to live with my family and a cute dog.
And I want to buy two bildings in Gangnam, Seoul to plan for my later years.
>> And I want to buy two buildings in Gangnam in Seoul to plan for my later years.
Oh my... Where is my beatiful dream?
>> correct!
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