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2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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What would you do if your best friend stole something from you? I don't want such things happen to me, but if my best friend did to me, I would not be able to make any action to the friend. I will try to understand why she had to do the action. It's not because I'm a kind person, but believing her is more easier than imagining her stoling my thing. But if it revealed that she had the intention to steal my thing, I would get mad a lot. Maybe I can just break away from her but before breaking, I will hear her excuses. Living about 20 years, I fought with friends many times and I always heard their excuses before doing actions. When I get upset, my decision isn't reasonable, I think. So that I always take some time to think about my decision. Haa... I'm really sorry teacher. I woke up almost all night doing my assignment of 'criminal investigation'class... I just wanted to sleep about 30 minutes before your class and made alarm at 11 am but I couldn't hear it ringing and also I couldn't hear your call... I saw you called 5 times! I'm apologizing and it won't happen again, I promise. Sorry about my lack of courtesy. Thank you.

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Hi there!!!     Thank you so much for taking the time to do your composition. I know that you have to do a lot of things so I appreciate it very much. It\'s okay I don\'t really mind what happened. I understand that you must have been very tired. I know that you are always doing your best in everything and I commend you for that. I will see you soon. Take care care always.   ~T.Erine~   What would you do if your best friend stole something from you?I don\'t want such things happen to me, but if my best friend did to me, >>I don\'t want such things to happen to me, but if my best friend did that to me, I would not be able to make any action to the friend. >> I would not be able to make any action to my friend.   I will try to understand why she had to do the action. >> Correct It\'s not because I\'m a kind person, but believing her is more easier than imagining her stoling my thing.                                                                                    >>much easier                           >> stealing or >> It\'s not because I\'m a kind person, but believing her is much easier than imagining her stealing my thing. But if it revealed that she had the intention to steal my thing, I would get mad a lot. >> But if it was revealed that she had the intention of stealing my thing, I would get mad a lot. Maybe I can just break away from her but before breaking, I will hear her excuses. >> Correct Living about 20 years, I fought with friends many times and I always heard their excuses before doing actions. >> before doing any action. When I get upset, my decision isn\'t reasonable, I think. >> Correct So that I always take some time to think about my decision. >> So I always take some time to think about my decision.Haa... I\'m really sorry teacher. I woke up almost all night doing my assignment of \'criminal investigation\'class... >> Correct I just wanted to sleep about 30 minutes before your class and made alarm at 11 am but I couldn\'t hear it ringing and also I couldn\'t hear your call... >> I just wanted to sleep for about 30 minutes before your class and I set the alarm to 11am but I didn\'t hear it ring and I also didn\'t hear your call... I saw you called 5 times! >> Correct I\'m apologizing and it won\'t happen again, I promise. >> I apologize and it won\'t happen again, I promise. Sorry about my lack of courtesy. >> CorrectThank you. >> Correct.

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