homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Reading is good at thinking.
And you always read a novel or information books.
I make a time to read the books.
I like books.
so, Ibought the books two weeks ago.
I like science,history and horror books.
I also like detective novel.
I read "I'm a legend"and "World war Z".
Reading helps our mind is strong.
강사 첨삭
A Jolly Thursday Tom!
Thank you for spending some time to write an essay tonight.
And also for extending your class again with me.^^
Wow! You were able to express your ideas well today.
I am so proud of you! You used new words! Excellent!
Just keep on writing and don\'t forget to go over the corrections below.
Keep up the good attitude! Have a nice day!
See you! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Reading is good at thinking.
>> Reading is good for our mind.
>> OR: Reading is good to enrich our mind.And you always read a novel or information books.
>> And you always read a novel or informative books.I make a time to read the books.
>> I make a time to read books.
>> OR: I find time to read books.I like books.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I like reading books. so, Ibought the books two weeks ago.
>> So, I bought books two weeks ago.
>> OR: I purchased some books two weeks ago.I like science,history and horror books.
>> Correct! ( Science, History, Horror)I also like detective novel.
>> I also like detective novels.I read \"I\'m a legend\"and \"World war Z\".
>> Correct!
>> OR: I read books titled \"I\'m a legend\"and \"World war Z\".Reading helps our mind is strong.
>> Reading helps our mind to be strong.
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