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2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Reading is good at thinking. And you always read a novel or information books. I make a time to read the books. I like books. so, Ibought the books two weeks ago. I like science,history and horror books. I also like detective novel. I read "I'm a legend"and "World war Z". Reading helps our mind is strong.

강사 첨삭

A Jolly Thursday Tom! Thank you for spending some time to write an essay tonight.   And also for extending your class again with me.^^ Wow! You were able to express your ideas well today. I am so proud of you! You used new words! Excellent! Just keep on writing and don\'t forget to go over the corrections below. Keep up the good attitude! Have a nice day! See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina Reading is good at thinking. >> Reading is good for our mind. >> OR: Reading is good to enrich our mind.And you always read a novel or information books. >> And you always read a novel or informative books.I make a time to read the books. >> I make a time to read books. >> OR: I find time to read books.I like books. >> Correct! >> OR: I like reading books. so, Ibought the books two weeks ago. >> So, I bought books two weeks ago. >> OR: I purchased some books two weeks ago.I like science,history and horror books. >> Correct! ( Science, History, Horror)I also like detective novel. >> I also like detective novels.I read \"I\'m a legend\"and \"World war Z\". >> Correct! >> OR:  I read books titled \"I\'m a legend\"and \"World war Z\".Reading helps our mind is strong. >> Reading helps our mind to be strong.

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