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2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Oh my god! Ms. [Name]! I was greatly surprised when you told me about your wedding for a joke. I saw some information about you in this hompage. Were you born in 1987? Me too! We are still young lady, I think. You can enjoy your life without husband. kk I have many things that I want to learn and play in my youth. I cannot waste my youth. So I'm going to the boxing class for my physical strength and my challenge sprit. Therefore enjoy your life! But the driving without lisence is dangerous. Be careful. Q : Imagine that you are in this situation. Could you take pride in being married to a househusband? No... If I must be married, It will be with the man who works in a good company. Because I mentioned it last homework, I wish to get two buildings and my own beatiful house.

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A beautiful evening Ms. [Name] [이름]! ^^ So you were one of the victims of my joke. kkkkk So sorry about that. I don\'t have any plan to get married anyway though I have a boyfriend. No. Not yet.  As what you have said, I have to enjoy my life as I am still young. I have to learn a lot more, play, have fun, go out and  socialize. So no no no... I am not yet going to get married. And if I am going to be married someday, that will be around 10 years more. hahahaha. And thanks for your concern, I am not driving all the time. So do not worry about lme. I just drive when I go back to my hometown. And I do not go home all the time. And when I drive, it\'s just near my place. I do not go very far since it\'s not really good. Anyway, you said we are at the same age so we really need to enjoy life. Do the things that you want to do now that you are still young. Have fun as they say! And if you are going to get married, you are going to get married first than me. hahahaha. ^^ I\'m gonna see you tomorrow! Good night! Have a good night sleep and sweet dreams! Bye!!    Always, Kathrine ^^   Oh my god! Ms. [Name]! >> correct!I was greatly surprised when you told me about your wedding for a joke. >>  I was greatly surprised when you told me about your wedding as a joke. I saw some information about you in this hompage. >> I saw some information about you in the homepage. Were you born in 1987? >> correct Me too! >> correct! We are still young lady, I think. >> We are still young ladies I think. You can enjoy your life without husband. kk >> You can enjoy your life without a husband. kkI have many things that I want to learn and play in my youth. >>  I have many things that I want to learn and play during my youth.I cannot waste my youth. >> correct! >> or: I cannot waste my time as I am still young.  So I\'m going to the boxing class for my physical strength and my challenge sprit. >>  So I am going to a boxing class for me to be physically strong and spiritually challenged.  Therefore enjoy your life! >> correct! But the driving without lisence is dangerous. >> correct! (spelling-license) Be careful.>> correct! Q : Imagine that you are in this situation. Could you take pride in being married to a househusband?No... If I must be married, It will be with the man who works in a good company. >>  correct! >> or: No. If I will get married, he should be a man working in a good company. Because I mentioned it last homework, I wish to get two buildings and my own beatiful house. >> correct!

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