homework~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A great Friday!
Your ideas are great! You were able to express your thoughts well.You have the ability to persuade someone with your own opinion.Keep it up!
But then, you were not able to construct your sentences very well.So, I have given you some corrections with regards to that.
Please check them out so that next time, if you are asked to write your opinion about some situations then you will do it correctly.
I know in time you\'ll be able to come up with a very good paragraph.Continue studying! You can do it!^^ You are a nice person! ^^
Q> It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the
friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to
explain your answer.
A> Oh~my god~~ it is a difficult to me~~
>>Oh my god! It is difficult for me.
Well~ when i meet to same chance~~
>>Well,when I will be in that situation I will not lend money.
I wiil not lend money~ Because~ also i am head of a family~
>>Correct! >>This is because I am the head of the family.
so i must to feed my family
>>So, I must support my family.
I usually think~ if my frind want to borrowing money~~
>>For me,If ever my friend wants to borrow money, _
i will give a littl bit some mony~ no reward~
>>I will lend him a small amount of money but with no interest.
To tell the truth~ i have a experience~the same time
>>Honestly, if I will have an experience like this, _
Of course, i told my wife~^.*
>> _of course, I will tell my wife.
Teacher~~ am i nice?
>>Correct!^^
OR>>Teacher,am I a nice person?
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