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2013-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Untill now, or now, I.m satisfaction of my life. Everything goes well. Sometimes I had a problem.But I like all my life. Because, until now ,I'm not regret of my life. How about you? Which period of your life do you like the most?Why?^^

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. Tom ^-^ It\'s the end of line again! Time really flies fast! Thank you for sending me an essay and it\'s good to know that you don\'t regret anything in your life. I hope that everything will goes well until you reach your goal!  One factor that makes a person satisfied with his/her life is his/her family. Am I right?   I will tell you my answer in class.  See you! Enjoy your dinner! Teacher Nina Untill now, or now, I.m satisfaction of my life. >> I am satisfied with my life now. >> OR: With what I have now in my life, I am satisfied. >> OR: I am contented with my life right now.Everything goes well. >> Correct! >> OR: Everything goes smoothly.Sometimes I had a problem. But I like all my life. >> I had problems sometimes but I like my life. >> OR: I had difficulties sometimes but I like everything about my life.Because, until now ,I\'m not regret of my life. >> I don\'t regret anything in my life because... >> OR: I don\'t regret anything I\'ve done in my life.How about you? >> Correct!Which period of your life do you like the most? >> Correct!Why?^^ >> Correct!

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