homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Untill now, or now, I.m satisfaction of my life.
Everything goes well.
Sometimes I had a problem.But I like all my life.
Because, until now ,I'm not regret of my life.
How about you? Which period of your life do you like the most?Why?^^
강사 첨삭
T.G.I.F. Tom ^-^
It\'s the end of line again! Time really flies fast!
Thank you for sending me an essay and it\'s good to know that you don\'t regret anything in your life.
I hope that everything will goes well until you reach your goal!
One factor that makes a person satisfied with his/her life is his/her family. Am I right?
I will tell you my answer in class. See you! Enjoy your dinner!
Teacher Nina
Untill now, or now, I.m satisfaction of my life.
>> I am satisfied with my life now.
>> OR: With what I have now in my life, I am satisfied.
>> OR: I am contented with my life right now.Everything goes well.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Everything goes smoothly.Sometimes I had a problem. But I like all my life.
>> I had problems sometimes but I like my life.
>> OR: I had difficulties sometimes but I like everything about my life.Because, until now ,I\'m not regret of my life.
>> I don\'t regret anything in my life because...
>> OR: I don\'t regret anything I\'ve done in my life.How about you?
>> Correct!Which period of your life do you like the most?
>> Correct!Why?^^
>> Correct!
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