homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.e
2.d
3.a
4.d
5.a
6.e
7.d
8.a
9.a
10.a
Yesterday, I went to fishing.
We got our fishing gears and bait. And we went to the car.
We arrived at "Jchen" dock.
And we used shirmp as bait.
We casted our fishing poles.
Suddenly I felt tug on my fishing gear.
And I winded in the line.
And I caught big fish.
After 10 minutes, I caught another two fishes.
Yeah~~
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Tom ^^
Wow! I know that you really had a great time last weekend.
You did a good job with your homework but please go over the corrections given for your improvement.
If you have any questions, just feel free to raise it in class.
I envy you. ^^ You caught a big fish.
Do you like eating fish? What kind of dishes?
Tell me about it in class.
See you!
Teacher Nina
1.e
>> Correct!2.d
>> B3.a
>> Correct!4.d
>> Correct!5.a
>> C6.e
>> Correct!7.d
>> Correct!8.a
>> B9.a
>> D10.a>> CYesterday, I went to fishing.
>> I went fishing yesterday.We got our fishing gears and bait.
>> Correct!
And we went to the car.
>> Correct!We arrived at \"Jchen\" dock.
>> Correct!And we used shirmp as bait.
>> And we used shrimp as a bait. (Spelling check: shrimp)We casted our fishing poles.
>> Correct!Suddenly I felt tug on my fishing gear.
>> Suddenly, I felt a tug on my fishing gear.And I winded in the line.
>> Did you mean: I winded my fishing gear. (You used it as a verb and it means to coil or ro roll like a string) And I caught big fish.
>> And I caught a big fish.After 10 minutes, I caught another two fishes.
>> Correct!Yeah~~
>> Yes! (This is an informal word for yes.)
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