Homework 36
학생이 쓴 원문
Obnubilate
HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD
Chris went to travel with his friends to jeju island. He saw a beautiful view and sculpture. At night he and his friends drunk a few alcohol with his mother's credit card. He spand $500 during the travel. And he returned to home and his mom asked it what happened for travel. his mother hit the nailon the head whether he drunk or not when he swiped her credit card. So he cannot help obnubilating about that anymore.
강사 첨삭
Wow! What can I say? You did very good! I hope you will keep up the good work..Even if Wednesday will be our last class together I will wait for you til you come back in September. I am so proud of you...Always remember that you can get and achieve anything you desire if you do your best.
I am always here for you my dear Sun...
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
ObnubilateHIT THE NAIL ON THE HEADChris went to travel with his friends to jeju island.
>>correct
He saw a beautiful view and sculpture. >>correct
At night he and his friends drunk a few alcohol with his mother\'s credit card.
>>correct
He spand $500 during the travel.
>>He sent $500 during the trip.
And he returned to home and his mom asked it what happened for travel.
>>He went back home and his mom asked him how was his trip.
his mother hit the nailon the head whether he drunk or not when he swiped her credit card.
>>correct
So he cannot help obnubilating about that anymore.
>>correct
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