Homework (36)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Why is sharing good?
Sharing is good because if I share something to a person, then that person will be happy.
2. What do you share with your family?
I share with my father his game.
3. What do you share with your friends?
I share 1 part of my food with my friend.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Wow! You have done a great job with your first homework for this week!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
Sharing is good because if I share something to a person, then that person will be happy.
>>CORRECT
I share with my father his game.
>>My father shares his fame to me.
I share 1 part of my food with my friend.
>>I share part of my food with my friend.
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