homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.b
2.a
3.c
4.b
5.a
6.b
7.a
8.b
9.b
10.c
After 2days,it is Chu seok.
I will eat a lot,I will eat Song peuns,I will bow at my grandparents and parents.
I like Chu seok,Because I can eat a lot of food1 I'm exciting.
강사 첨삭
A fantastic Tuesday Tom ^-^
Wow! I know that you are really excited to celebrate Chuseok!
I heard that Songpyeon is a traditional food in Korea.
I know that it is really delicious.
You almost got a perfect score! Amazing!
Please go over the corrections I provided for you.
It will be a long holiday so I hope that you will have a great time with your family.
See you in class! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
1.b
>> Correct! 2.a
>> Correct! 3.c
>> Correct! 4.b
>> Correct! 5.a
>> Correct! 6.b
>> Correct! 7.a
>> Correct! 8.b
>> C 9.b
>> Correct! 10.c
>> Correct! After 2days,it is Chu seok.
>> After two days, we are going to celebrate Chuseok.
>> OR: After two days, we are going to celebrate Chuseok. It is one of the most important festivals in Korea.I will eat a lot,I will eat Song peuns,I will bow at my grandparents and parents.
>> I will eat a lot. I will eat Songpyeon. I will bow to my grandparents and to my parents to show respect.
>> OR: I will eat a lot of food, especially Songpyeon. I will show respect by bowing to my grandparents and to my parents too.I like Chu seok,Because I can eat a lot of food1 I\'m exciting.
>> I like Chuseok because I can eat a lot of food. I am excited.
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