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2013-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.a 3.c 4.b 5.a 6.b 7.a 8.b 9.b 10.c After 2days,it is Chu seok. I will eat a lot,I will eat Song peuns,I will bow at my grandparents and parents. I like Chu seok,Because I can eat a lot of food1 I'm exciting.

강사 첨삭

A fantastic Tuesday Tom ^-^ Wow! I know that you are really excited to celebrate Chuseok! I heard that Songpyeon is a traditional food in Korea. I know that it is really delicious. You almost got a perfect score!  Amazing! Please go over the corrections I provided for you. It will be a long holiday so I hope that you will have a great time with your family. See you in class! Take Care! Teacher Nina 1.b >> Correct! 2.a >> Correct! 3.c >> Correct! 4.b >> Correct! 5.a >> Correct! 6.b >> Correct! 7.a >> Correct! 8.b >> C 9.b >> Correct! 10.c >> Correct! After 2days,it is Chu seok. >> After two days, we are going to celebrate Chuseok. >> OR: After two days, we are going to celebrate Chuseok. It is one of the most important festivals in Korea.I will eat a lot,I will eat Song peuns,I will bow at my grandparents and parents. >> I will eat a lot. I will eat Songpyeon. I will bow to my grandparents and to my parents to show respect. >> OR: I will eat a lot of food, especially Songpyeon. I will show respect by bowing to my grandparents and to my parents too.I like Chu seok,Because I can eat a lot of food1 I\'m exciting. >> I like Chuseok because I can eat a lot of food. I am excited.

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