HOMEWORK
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what is your biggest mistake you did to your friend and how did you apologize?
firstly,i must apologize to my friend and i tell him my some unavoidable reasons
lastly, i promise not to make mistakes like that again
so i will do drinking beer with my friend hahaha
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~T.Chelsea
what is your biggest mistake you did to your friend and how did you apologize?firstly,i must apologize to my friend and i tell him my some unavoidable reasons>>First, I must apologize to my friend and I will tell him my reasonable explanation.
>>First, I must apologize to my friend and I will explain my reason.lastly, i promise not to make mistakes like that again>>Lastly, I will promise not to make mistakes like that again.
>>Lastly, I will promise not to make the same mistake again.so i will do drinking beer with my friend hahaha
>>So I will drink beer with my friend hahaha.
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