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2013-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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what is your biggest mistake you did to your friend and how did you apologize? firstly,i must apologize to my friend and i tell him my some unavoidable reasons lastly, i promise not to make mistakes like that again so i will do drinking beer with my friend hahaha

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Hi there^^, Thank you for doing your homework!! You did a great job expressing your ideas. Keep it up!! Anyway, I\'ll see you in class!! Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea what is your biggest mistake you did to your friend and how did you apologize?firstly,i must apologize to my friend and i tell him my some unavoidable reasons>>First, I must apologize to my friend and I will tell him my reasonable explanation. >>First, I must apologize to my friend and I will explain my reason.lastly, i promise not to make mistakes like that again>>Lastly, I will promise not to make mistakes like that again. >>Lastly, I will promise not to make the same mistake again.so i will do drinking beer with my friend hahaha >>So I will drink beer with my friend hahaha.

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