Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell what to do in an earthquake.
As I will be a police officer in near future, I have to save other people first. But priority always exists as I am human. I will help and save my family firstly and after I'll look for others.
Police should find a safe place, take people to the shelter, prepare dried food, et cetera. One more, they should calm down the shocked and injured people. I can't say that my safety doesn't matter but if I have to [이름]ose between other's safety, I have to save others. I should save others. I don't used to sacrifying for others before but I think my s[이름]ol brainwashed me. Haha.
If I have spare time even in an earthquake, I don't think so, anyway I will play League of Legend!!!!!!!! It's really really exciting!!
How was your chu-seok holiday?
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Sarah!
A big smile to appreciate you for doing your homework!^.^
You missed some grammar rules but I know you can improve them by reviewing them.
We don\'t celebrate Chu-seok here in the Philippines, but I was able to use my time to take a rest and to recuperate my energy.
Thank you for asking!
See you in class!~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Tell what to do in an earthquake.As I will be a police officer in near future, I have to save other people first.
>>As I will be a police officer in the near future, I will have to save other people first.
But priority always exists as I am human.
>>Correct.
I will help and save my family firstly and after I\'ll look for others.
>>I will help and save my family first then I\'ll look for the others.Police should find a safe place, take people to the shelter, prepare dried food, et cetera.
>>Correct.
One more, they should calm down the shocked and injured people.
>>Correct.
I can\'t say that my safety doesn\'t matter but if I have to [이름]ose between other\'s safety, I have to save others. I should save others.
>>I can\'t say that my safety doesn\'t matter but if I have to [이름]ose between other\'s safety and mine, I have to save other people.
I don\'t used to sacrifying for others before but I think my s[이름]ol brainwashed me. Haha.>>I am not used to sacrificing for others before but I think my s[이름]ol brainwashed me. If I have spare time even in an earthquake, I don\'t think so, anyway I will play League of Legend!!!!!!!! It\'s really really exciting!!
>>If I have a spare time even in an earthquake, which I don\'t think is going to happen, I will play League of Legend! It\'s really exciting!How was your chu-seok holiday?
>>Correct.
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