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2013-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Aimee

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: valuable, worth a lot vain: precious 2. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: keep, save: preserve 3. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: private, secret confidential: regard 4. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: smell, odor: limb 5. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: big, large, huge: lame 6. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: garbage, trash: rubbish 7. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: fear, nervousness: anxiety 8. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: decoration: substance 9. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: unusual, special, unique: fancy 10. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: competitor, enemy: rival -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Plz check my essay ^^ We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion,what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important. I could get some lesson from my experience I had got until now. I think that it is eventually depending on who is my coworker what think and how behave. For example, If my coworker talks negatively I also do that like him/her. If my coworker talks positively I also do that like him/her. Now I'm going to write only two information related to that. 1. Have a positive mind The most workers who I had ever met worried easily about future They do that about things even not happen or some scare the other coworkers about a work. For example They said like that. This job would be so hard so you would be going to have a mind that you want to quit your job at soon. I really hate this person doing that. I believe only one belief. "As you say"... you could feel your job make your tired It just depends on what you say. 2. Find a meaning of your job. We ask our friends like this question in common in my country "Why do you this work?" and they answered "Because salary is so high or the reputation of my company is so good". In the end they just endure hardship due to these things regardless of their happiness. So when I work with them I couldn’t feel energy. In my case whenever I do my work I try to find a meaning of my job even if my job is timid. For instance, I get some lesson and adapt to my life or next project. As a result, I can feel enjoyable about my job and I could express my positive opinion to my coworkers. dWhen you meet a coworker like me, you would definitely be happy.

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Goodevening [이름]^^ Wow... I had a blast checking your essay. You are becoming a very good writer dear. Just try to double check you sentences and how you deliver your ideas. You got amazing ideas. You point it out very very well. Keep up the good work dear. See you tomorrow^^   Always, ~Aimee^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: valuable, worth a lot vain: precious >> Correct2. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: keep, save: preserve>> Correct3. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: private, secret confidential: regard >> Correct4. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: smell, odor: limb>> scent5. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: big, large, huge: lame >> immense6. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: garbage, trash: rubbish >> Correct7. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: fear, nervousness: anxiety >> Correct8. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: decoration: substance >> ornament9. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: unusual, special, unique: fancy >> extraordinary10. Choose the word most similar in meaning to: competitor, enemy: rival>> Correct--------------------------------------------------------------------------------Plz check my essay ^^ We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion,what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.>> CorrectI could get some lesson from my experience I had got until now. >>I could get some lessons from my experiences which I had already.I think that it is eventually depending on who is my coworker what think and how behave. >> I think it depends on who your co-worker is and how she or he thinks or behaves.For example, >>  CorrectIf my coworker talks negatively I also do that like him/her. >> If my coworker talks negatively, I also do the same.If my coworker talks positively I also do that like him/her. >> If my co-worker talks positively the I would talk even better to him or her.Now I\'m going to write only two information related to that.>> Now, I\'m going to write about two important things related to this.1. Have a positive mind >> Correct  >> The first one is about having a positive point of view.The most workers who I had ever met worried easily about future >> Most workers whom I\'ve met were all worried about the future. >> Most workers whom I knew were all worried about what the future brings.They do that about things even not happen or some scare the other coworkers about a work. >> They do things even if these are impssible to happen and maybe because they are also afraid that their co-workers are thinking about the same thing.For example; >> CorrectThey said like that. This job would be so hard so you would be going to have a mind that you want to quit your job at soon. >> Most of them would say that their job were difficult and they would end up thinking about quiting. I really hate this person doing that. >> I really hate people doing this.I believe only one belief. >> I only believe in one verse.\"As you say\"... you could feel your job make your tirsed It just depends on what you say.>> \"As you\'ve said\"...you can feel tired from work but having a positive mind will keep you going.^^>2. Find a meaning of your job. >> 2. Finding a meaning in you job >> As for the second view, One should find a meaning in his or her job.We ask our friends like this question in common in my country >> We\'ve asked some friends a question which is very common in our country.\"Why do you this work?\" and they answered \"Because salary is so high or the reputation of my company is so good\". >> \"Why do you work?\", most peopla say that it is because of money and reputation in the company.In the end they just endure hardship due to these things regardless of their happiness. >> CorrectSo when I work with them I couldn’t feel energy. >> So whe I work with them, I couldn\'t feel any energy.In my case whenever I do my work I try to find a meaning of my job even if my job is timid. >> In my case, whenever I work, I try to find a meaning on what I do, even if it is a very timid work.For instance, I get some lesson and adapt to my life or next project. >> For instance, I learn a lot more about things and just adopt to my life or to my next project.As a result, I can feel enjoyable about my job and I could express my positive opinion to my coworkers. >> As a result, I can enjoy my job and I could express my opinions positively to my coworkers. dWhen you meet a coworker like me, you would definitely be happy. >>When you meet a coworker like me, you would definitely be very happy.^^

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