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2013-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I usually buy the vegetables and fishes. Because,my family love the food. I also usually buy detergent The name of the detergent is "Downy" I usally buy the pork,too. And we grill the pork.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom! A fantastic Monday to you! Long time no see! I am so happy to open my week with you! How was your holiday?  I hope that you really had a marvelous time with your family and relatives. Do you usually go to the supermarket with your mom? How often? Tell me about it in class. I am so excited to hear lots of stories from you. See you! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina I usually buy the vegetables and fishes. >> I usually buy vegetables and fishes.Because,my family love the food. >> Because my family love food. >> OR: It\'s because my family love eating food.I also usually buy detergent >> I also usually buy a detergent. The name of the detergent is \"Downy\" >> Correct! >> OR: The brand name of the detergent is \"Downy\".I usally buy the pork,too. >> I usually buy pork too.And we grill the pork. >> Correct!

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