homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm very thankful to my parents.
They help me to be a good person.They try anything for me.
I can't talking about my parents.
Because I think they are me
How great parents they are.
I'm very famous now.And there are good parents behind me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
Good evening!
I am sure that you are really proud of your parents.
You are really blessed to have them.
We should not forget to show our parents how much we love them everyday.
Parents are the people who understand and support us all the way.
See you in class!
Teacher Nina
I\'m very thankful to my parents.
>> Correct! They help me to be a good person.
>> Correct!
>> OR: They guide me to be a good person.
>> OR: They nurture me to be a good person.
They try anything for me.
>> Did you mean: They do anything for me.I can\'t talking about my parents.
>> Did you mean: I can\'t talk about my parents.
>> OR: I can\'t help to talk about my parents.Because I think they are me
>> Because I think I am like them.How great parents they are.
>> CorrectI\'m very famous now.
>> Correct!
And there are good parents behind me.
>> Correct!
>> OR: And there are good parents who support me.
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