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2013-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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1. Q: Have you ever tried this before? A: Yes,I've _______________ . -> b) tried it many times 2. Q: How much money do you have? A: I have _______________ money. -> b) absolutely no 3. Q: Did you get a good night's sleep? A: No, I only _______________ last night. -> b) slept six hours 4. Q: Your brother can't come? A: No, and I _______________ much to see him! -> a) wanted so 5. Q: When were you in Greece? A: I _______________. -> a) was there last September I have a good friend whose name is Sua kim. Actually she is older than me so I call her a sister. We met at the previous company first. We have known each other for 12 years. I think that we are soulmates. We are the person who needs for each other. She helps me when I am in bad situations. Also I help her to get over her sorrows. Our birthdays are same. We have celebrated our birthdays together almost every year since we knew the fact. I think that I am very lucky because she is my friend.

강사 첨삭

An impressive writing! Very good Ma\'am Eun Young because you only have a few mistakes. Yes, I think you are really lucky to have her. So, treasure your frienship.  Anyway, good night Ma\'am.  - Teacher Chloe 1. Q: Have you ever tried this before? A: Yes,I\'ve _______________ .-> b) tried it many times >>Correct!2. Q: How much money do you have? A: I have _______________ money.-> b) absolutely no >>Correct!3. Q: Did you get a good night\'s sleep? A: No, I only _______________ last night.-> b) slept six hours >>Correct!4. Q: Your brother can\'t come? A: No, and I _______________ much to see him!-> a) wanted so >>Correct!5. Q: When were you in Greece? A: I _______________.-> a) was there last September >>Correct!I have a good friend whose name is Sua kim. >>Correct! Actually she is older than me so I call her a sister.>>Actually, she is older than me si I call her \"sister\". We met at the previous company first. >>We met in my previous company.We have known each other for 12 years. >>Correct!I think that we are soulmates. >>Correct!We are the person who needs for each other. >>We need each other.She helps me when I am in bad situations. >>Correct! Also I help her to get over her sorrows. >>Correct!Our birthdays are same. >>We have the same birthdays. We have celebrated our birthdays together almost every year since we knew the fact. >>Correct! I think that I am very lucky because she is my friend. >>Correct!

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