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2013-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I always help my classmate.and there is no reason. Because I always think that I must help my classmates. But my classmates don't help me. When they help me,there is a reason. They want to get a great gift from me.I'm sad. I want to make my real,great friend. Oh,poor Wu-[이름]!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Tom^^ Thank you for sending me an essay today, How was your weekend? Did you have a great time? It\'s the first day of the week again and I\'m happy about it. I hope that you will have a great week ahead of you. It is good to help other people whole-heartedly. Don\'t worry if you don\'t benefit anything from helping. Don\'t be sad. You will be able to find a true friend because you are a great person. I am also your friend Tom. ^^ Smile and be happy! See you in class!Teacher Nina I always help my classmate.and there is no reason. >> I always help my classmate even if there is no reason.Because I always think that I must help my classmates. >> Because I always think about helpiing my classmates. >> OR: I always put in mind that I should help my classmates always.But my classmates don\'t help me. >> Correct! >> OR: But my classsmates don\'t lend a helping hand.When they help me,there is a reason. >> Correct! >> OR: When they lend a helping hand, there should be a reason. They want to get a great gift from me. >> They want to receive a great gift from me. I\'m sad. >> Correct!I want to make my real,great friend. >> I want to make a real and great friend. >> OR: I want to have a true friend.Oh,poor Wu-[이름]! >> Correct!

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