homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I always help my classmate.and there is no reason.
Because I always think that I must help my classmates.
But my classmates don't help me.
When they help me,there is a reason.
They want to get a great gift from me.I'm sad.
I want to make my real,great friend.
Oh,poor Wu-[이름]!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Tom^^
Thank you for sending me an essay today,
How was your weekend? Did you have a great time?
It\'s the first day of the week again and I\'m happy about it.
I hope that you will have a great week ahead of you.
It is good to help other people whole-heartedly. Don\'t worry if you don\'t benefit anything from helping.
Don\'t be sad. You will be able to find a true friend because you are a great person.
I am also your friend Tom. ^^ Smile and be happy! See you in class!Teacher Nina
I always help my classmate.and there is no reason.
>> I always help my classmate even if there is no reason.Because I always think that I must help my classmates.
>> Because I always think about helpiing my classmates.
>> OR: I always put in mind that I should help my classmates always.But my classmates don\'t help me.
>> Correct!
>> OR: But my classsmates don\'t lend a helping hand.When they help me,there is a reason.
>> Correct!
>> OR: When they lend a helping hand, there should be a reason. They want to get a great gift from me.
>> They want to receive a great gift from me.
I\'m sad.
>> Correct!I want to make my real,great friend.
>> I want to make a real and great friend.
>> OR: I want to have a true friend.Oh,poor Wu-[이름]!
>> Correct!
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