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강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
That was sweet..^^ Thanks for sharing me about this.
Job well done and I can feel your heart in this work.
Thanks and see you in class^^
TEACHER KELLY
How has your life changed over the past five years?
Over the past five years, I\'ve got many changes in my life.
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I\'ve got two babies more.
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It was a very surprising event to me and my family.
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Although I was an old-aged mom a little and I didn\'t have any more time to do something for relaxation, I\'m happy with my kids and our house is filled with children\'s laughter again.
>>Although I am a little old-aged mom and I didn\'t have any more time to do something for relaxation, I\'m happy with my kids because our house is filled with our children\'s laughter again.
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