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Because I think the vision of company correspondent to mine I have a goal to provide virtue to people and achieve my career goal Last april, I worked as part time interpreter in Global Buisness Plaza. I was in charge of Pharmaceutical area. I realized that they weren’t eligible for benefit of various types of eye drops or pain relief patch. I felt sorry to watch that something that I took for granted was unattainable on the other side of the world. And I thought that if I could contribute with my humble capacity to the latinamerica pharmaceutical market, I could feel worthwhile and sense of duty and build my own career at the same time. Especially, Celltrion, the first inventor of biosimiar Not only promote benefit of its product but also alleviate people from unbearable pain which is truly helper in medical welfare for whom are not well-to-do thank to its ecothank to its economic price. This is coincide in my vision

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Because I think the vision of company correspondent to mine

>>Since I believe the vision of the company is similar with mine,
I have a goal to provide virtue to people

>>I have a goal to provide excellent service to the clients.
and achieve my career goal

>>at the same time achieving my career goals.
Last april, I worked as part time interpreter in Global Buisness Plaza.

>>Last April,____.

I was in charge of Pharmaceutical area.

>>I was in charge of interpreting for the Pharmaceutical department.
I realized that they weren’t eligible for benefit of various types of eye drops or pain relief patch.

>>I realized that they weren\'t eligible to benefit from the various types of eye drops or pain relief patch.
I felt sorry to watch that something that I took for granted was unattainable on the other side of the world.

>>I felt sorry to see that something taken for granted is unavailable on the other side of the world.
And I thought that if I could contribute with my humble capacity to the latinamerica pharmaceutical market,
I could feel worthwhile and sense of duty and build my own career at the same time.

>>And I thought that with my humble capacity I could contribute something to the Latin American pharmaceutical market, I would have a sense of worth (or satisfaction) and responsibility while building my own career.
Especially, Celltrion, the first inventor of biosimiar

>>I would like to especially promote Celtrion which is the first biosimilar to be invented.
Not only promote benefit of its product but also alleviate people from unbearable pain

>>Not only to promote the benefits of this product bu also to alleviate the unbearable pain of people. 
which is truly helper in medical welfare for whom are not well-to-do thank to its ecothank to its economic price.

>>This is a true helper in the medical welfare for those who are not well to do thanks to it\'s economical price.
This is coincide in my vision

>>This also coincides with my vision.