homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.When
2.since
3.Although
4.before
5.Since
Do you know King Se-jong?
He was the perfect king in my country.
He made Han-gul.
Han-gul is korean. the invention of Han-gul is a concrete example of King Se-jong's greatness.
I'm proud of that I'm the descendant of King Se-jong.
강사 첨삭
A merry Wednesday to you Tom^^
What an impressive composition! You made my day!
Excellent! I am so proud fo you! You used the words that we learned during our class. Keep it up!
You also did a great job with your homework! I know that you will be able to reach your goal in due time.
Keep your ideas flowing and keep on composing great sentences! Amazing!
Can\'t wait to talk to you in class! See you!
Teacher Nina
1.When
>> Since 2.since
>> so that 3.Although
>> Correct! 4.before
>> Correct! 5.Since>> Correct!
Do you know King Se-jong?
>> Correct! He was the perfect king in my country.
>> Correct!
>> OR: He was the perfect king in Korea.He made Han-gul.
>> Correct! (Check: Hangul ^^)Han-gul is korean.
>> Hanggul is the Korean alphabet.
the invention of Han-gul is a concrete example of King Se-jong\'s greatness.
>> The invention of Hangul is a concrete example of King Se-jong\'s work.
>> OR: The invention of Hangul is a concrete example of King Se-jong\'s notable works.I\'m proud of that I\'m the descendant of King Se-jong.
>> I\'m proud that I\'m one of the descendants of King Se-jong.
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