homework
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Write an essay about the most interesting film/movie that you've seen so far.
I don't have time to see a movies, these days. I saw a movies last time one year ago, "Thieves". It was not the most intersting movie but the last film that I have enjoyed. I and my husband had the special seats with comfortable chair and snack served. In the theater, there were only three couples including us. We enjoyed well at ease rather than a movie.
강사 첨삭
Hello ma\'am! Thank you for sharing the most interesting movie which you\'ve seen. I hope that you can have much free tome so you can also enjoy. See you in class.
~t. KELLY~
Write an essay about the most interesting film/movie that you\'ve seen so far.
I don\'t have time to see a movies, these days.
>> I don\'t have time to watch movies these days.
I saw a movies last time one year ago, \"Thieves\".
>> I watched the movie \"Thieves\" last year.
>> The last time I watched a movie was last year, and the title was \"Thieves\"
It was not the most intersting movie but the last film that I have enjoyed.
>> It was not the most interesting movie but it was the last film that I enjoyed.
I and my husband had the special seats with comfortable chair and snack served.
>> My husband and I had special seats with comfortable chair and snack served.
In the theater, there were only three couples including us.
>> Correct.
We enjoyed well at ease rather than a movie.
>> We enjoyed much.
***I\'m not really sure what you meant with \"at ease rather than a movie\" ma\'am. If you have questions, we can discuss during the class. Thank you
~t. KELLY~
Write an essay about the most interesting film/movie that you\'ve seen so far.
I don\'t have time to see a movies, these days.
>> I don\'t have time to watch movies these days.
I saw a movies last time one year ago, \"Thieves\".
>> I watched the movie \"Thieves\" last year.
>> The last time I watched a movie was last year, and the title was \"Thieves\"
It was not the most intersting movie but the last film that I have enjoyed.
>> It was not the most interesting movie but it was the last film that I enjoyed.
I and my husband had the special seats with comfortable chair and snack served.
>> My husband and I had special seats with comfortable chair and snack served.
In the theater, there were only three couples including us.
>> Correct.
We enjoyed well at ease rather than a movie.
>> We enjoyed much.
***I\'m not really sure what you meant with \"at ease rather than a movie\" ma\'am. If you have questions, we can discuss during the class. Thank you
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