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2013-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.d 2.h 3.b 4.g 5.f 6.e 7.a 8.c I climbed Hanla Mountain yesterday. One of the Hanla Mountain.I climbed Youngcil. I arrived at Youngcil at 11o'clock and I came home at 5 o'clock. I felt tired.But I feel happy that I can climb the biggest mountain in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Happy Firday Tom^^Thank you for doing your homework. I am so proud of you! Please tell me more about your experience in climbing the highest mountain in Korea later. I am excited to hear all of your stories. Can\'t wait to talk to you! Teacher Nina 1.d >> E2.h >> Correct! 3.b >> Correct! 4.g >> Correct! 5.f >> C 6.e >> F 7.a >> Correct! 8.c>> D I climbed Hanla Mountain yesterday. >> Correct! One of the Hanla Mountain. I climbed Youngcil. >> Did you mean: One of the mountains in Hanla is Youngcil and I climbed it. >> OR: I climbed Youngcil mountain.I arrived at Youngcil at 11o\'clock and I came home at 5 o\'clock. >> Correct! I felt tired. But I feel happy that I can climb the biggest mountain in Korea. >> I felt tired but I was happy that I was able to climb the highest mountain in Korea.

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