homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.d
2.h
3.b
4.g
5.f
6.e
7.a
8.c
I climbed Hanla Mountain yesterday.
One of the Hanla Mountain.I climbed Youngcil.
I arrived at Youngcil at 11o'clock and I came home at 5 o'clock.
I felt tired.But I feel happy that I can climb the biggest mountain in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Happy Firday Tom^^Thank you for doing your homework. I am so proud of you!
Please tell me more about your experience in climbing the highest mountain in Korea later.
I am excited to hear all of your stories.
Can\'t wait to talk to you!
Teacher Nina
1.d
>> E2.h
>> Correct! 3.b
>> Correct!
4.g
>> Correct! 5.f
>> C 6.e
>> F 7.a
>> Correct! 8.c>> D I climbed Hanla Mountain yesterday.
>> Correct! One of the Hanla Mountain. I climbed Youngcil.
>> Did you mean: One of the mountains in Hanla is Youngcil and I climbed it.
>> OR: I climbed Youngcil mountain.I arrived at Youngcil at 11o\'clock and I came home at 5 o\'clock.
>> Correct! I felt tired. But I feel happy that I can climb the biggest mountain in Korea.
>> I felt tired but I was happy that I was able to climb the highest mountain in Korea.
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