homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.other
2.other
3.another
4.the other
5.the other
I have a good news.I will buy a saltwater fish today.Yeepee!
I hope my fish will be healthy.
My saltwater fishes named "tom"and "Gobong"will be happy.
강사 첨삭
A Jolly Monday Tom^^
Wow! I am so happy for you!
Of course! Your fishes will be healthy because you are going to take good care of them.
Amazing! You almost got a perfect score! Keep up the good work!
I hope to see your fishes in class.^^ See you!
Have a great day!
Teacher Nina
1.other
>> Correct!2.other
>> others 3.another
>> Correct!4.the other
>> Correct!5.the other
>> Correct!I have a good news.
>> I have a good news.
>> OR: Teacher, I have a good news to tell you.
I will buy a saltwater fish today.
>> I will buy saltwater fishes today.
Yeepee!
>> Yipee!I hope my fish will be healthy.
>> I hope that my fishes will be healthy.
>> OR: I hope that the fishes I will buy are healthy.My saltwater fishes named \"tom\"and \"Gobong\"will be happy.
>> Correct! {Check: Tom ^^ It should be written in capital letters.)
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