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2013-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.other 2.other 3.another 4.the other 5.the other I have a good news.I will buy a saltwater fish today.Yeepee! I hope my fish will be healthy. My saltwater fishes named "tom"and "Gobong"will be happy.

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A Jolly Monday Tom^^ Wow! I am so happy for you! Of course! Your fishes will be healthy because you are going to take good care of them. Amazing! You almost got a perfect score! Keep up the good work! I hope to see your fishes in class.^^ See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina 1.other >> Correct!2.other >> others 3.another >> Correct!4.the other >> Correct!5.the other >> Correct!I have a good news. >> I have a good news. >> OR: Teacher, I have a good news to tell you. I will buy a saltwater fish today. >> I will buy saltwater fishes today. Yeepee! >> Yipee!I hope my fish will be healthy. >> I hope that my fishes will be healthy. >> OR: I hope that the fishes I will buy are healthy.My saltwater fishes named \"tom\"and \"Gobong\"will be happy. >> Correct! {Check: Tom ^^ It should be written in capital letters.)

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