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Q. Do we value only what we struggle for?
A. I think it's the most important thing that what he/she struggle for to judge who he/she is. Because what he/she struggle for means that his/her desire, dream, or vision of a life.
People are divided two types. One is a man who lives enthusiastically for the moment. And other is a man who lives randomly without any goals in his/her life.
For example, a person who wants be a teacher struggle for learning and teaching.
I believe that a man who has been keeping a dream for a long time, he is being alike the dream.
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Good evening. I can see you effort in this work and I appreciate that^^
Good job! Keep on expressing your thoughts^^
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Teacher Rose
Q. Do we value only what we struggle for?A. I think it\'s the most important thing that what he/she struggle for to judge who he/she is.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I think the most important thing is that what he/ she struggles for made him/she for who he/she is.
Because what he/she struggle for means that his/her desire, dream, or vision of a life.>> Because what he/ she struggles for mean that it is his/ her desir, dream or vision in life.People are divided two types.
>> There two kinds of people.
One is a man who lives enthusiastically for the moment.
>> Correct
And other is a man who lives randomly without any goals in his/her life.>>CorrectFor example, a person who wants be a teacher struggle for learning and teaching.>>CorrectI believe that a man who has been keeping a dream for a long time, he is being alike the dream.
>>DID YOU MEAN: I believe that a man who have been keeping a dream for a long time, is man who can reach his dream.
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