homework~~

2013-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Dalia

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What qualities are most important to you in a partner? For example, intelligence, sense of humor, money. ( teacher ! I don't know what does " in a partner ' mean.) Maybe .. The most important quality is humility. Most of people want to respected by someone. They always want to show off thier merit. Of course I am same with them. But I always control the conceit. I always endure to show respect to other. But many people who I saw until now, More I show respect to them, More ignore me. So I am always thinking about the problem. Sometime I am very sad because of the ignoring people. ㅠㅠ..

강사 첨삭

Hi there Yeriel,

Wow! This one was really good.
I was really amazed!
See you in class!
Good Night!

T. Dahlia

( teacher ! I don\'t know what does \" in a partner \' mean.)

>> Teacher, I don\'t know what does in a partner mean?
>> A partner means a husband or partner in life in the future.
Maybe ..
>>Correct !
The most important quality is humility.
>>Correct !
Most of people want to respected by someone.
>>Most of people want to be respected by someone.
They always want to show off thier merit.
>>They always want to show off their merit.
Of 
course I am same with them.
>> Correct !
But I always control the conceit.
>> Correct !
I always endure to show respect to other.
>> Correct !
But many people who I saw until now,
>> Correct !
Mo
re I show respect to them, More ignore me.
>>The more I shown respect to them the more they ignore me.
So I am always thinking about the problem.
>> So, I\'m always thinking about this problem.
Sometime I am very sad because of the ignoring people.
>>Sometimes I\'m very sad because of those people who ignore me.

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