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2013-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.They find a parking place near the shops rarely. 2.I sometimes fly to Florida with my parents. 3.They often have a cup of tea in the afternoon at about three o'clock at the hotel. 4.I could ski hardly last year 5.She often came late to school in the spring last year. I am breeding my new fish. And that's name is "Fox face" I am feeding my fishes and all of my fishes are healthy. Oh,yeah!

강사 첨삭

A sweet Tuesday to you Tom I am sure that you are really happy taking good care of your fishes. How was your day? Did you have a fun day? I was so happy last night when you showed me the pictures of your fishes.^^ They will be really healthy because of you.^^ Please go over the corrections below for your homework, if you have any questions just raise it in class.^^ See you! Have a great night! Teacher Nina   1.They find a parking place near the shops rarely. >> They rarely find a parking place near the shops.2.I sometimes fly to Florida with my parents. >> Correct!3.They often have a cup of tea in the afternoon at about three o\'clock at the hotel. >> They often have a cup of tea at the hotel at about three o\'clock in the afternoon.4.I could ski hardly last year >> He could hardly ski last year.5.She often came late to school in the spring last year. >> She often came late to school in spring last year.I am breeding my new fish. >> Correct! And that\'s name is \"Fox face\" >> The breed of my fish is \"Fox face\".I am feeding my fishes and all of my fishes are healthy. >> Correct!Oh,yeah! >> Correct!

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