Homework :)

2013-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Thank you for your energetic class! It was a very first class that I have so far in the morning. So, that day I was not a good student. but from now on, I will try to do my best! I love your energy! Our first class was incredible! I felt I had a class in the afternoon. I did my first homework. Please check :) 1.We tried to catch the 9 o'clock train, but (we didn't) .The doctor told Henry to stop (smoking). 3.Do you expect to (get a promotion?) 4.All the beach hotels were full, so they ended up (back home) 5.I love this city. I can't imagine (I'm living another city)

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday!! Whoa! I deeply appreciate your message! Your energy was just as great! Even though it was your first conversation in  the morning, I was happy because of your participation! On the other hand, I checked your homework over and did some corrections like synonyms and punctuation marks^^ Still, it was great! See you later^^ Thank you for your energetic class!>>Thank you for your dynamic class! It was a very first class that I have so far in the morning. >>It was the very first class that I had so far in the morning.So, that day I was not a good student. >>CORRECT!  but from now on, I will try to do my best! >>But from now on, I will try to do my best!I love your energy! >>CORRECT! Our first class was incredible! >>CORRECT!I felt I had a class in the afternoon. >>I felt like I had a class in the afternoon. I did my first homework. Please check :)>>CORRECT!1.We tried to catch the 9 o\'clock train, but (we didn\'t) >>CORRECT!The doctor told Henry to stop (smoking). >>CORRECT!3.Do you expect to (get a promotion?) >>CORRECT!4.All the beach hotels were full, so they ended up (back home) >>All the beach hotels were full, so they ended up going back home.5.I love this city. I can\'t imagine (I\'m living another city) >>I love this city. I can\'t imagine living in another place.

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