homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you do when you are feeling blue?
I connected with my high school friends through SNS, these days.
I met them yesterday and I was very pleased to see them.
We had a chat and talked about things in high school.
On one hand, I was sad and teared up because of our pass time.
We became mothers' age when we were in high school.
강사 첨삭
Hello ma\'am [이름]! It feels good to be reunited with our high school friends. They remind us of good memories. I\'m happy that you still find time to see each other even if you\'re all busy. Anyway, have a great day and see you in class.
~t. KELLY~
What do you do when you are feeling blue?
>> These days, I connect with my high school friends through SMS (Short Message Service).
>> Correct.
We had a chat and talked about things in high school.
>> Correct.
>> On the other hand, I was sad and tearful because time flew so fast.
We became mothers\' age when we were in high school.
>> We are already mothers.
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