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2013-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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"What is the significance of Hanguel Day? Why is there a need to make it a national holiday in Korea?" Hanguel is korean own languge. The King Sejong made Hanguel for all the pepole in 1440's. In 1440's Korean use chinese to write, only pepole of high calss could write and read chinese words. there were many illiterate pepole at that time. Chinese words are so difficult and it is hard to learn. The King Sejong decided to make koreans' own languge which is easy to learn and make all the people to write and read. We all Koreans are pride of Hanguel becasue it is unique and scientific. Anybody can write and read Hanguel within 3days. A few of countries which don't have languges to write and read are learning Hangueal and also use Hanguel already. I think the King Sejong gave us too easy languge to us, that's the reason Korean think that English is difficult to learn. I wonder suddenly who makes English.

강사 첨삭

Hey there! Wow! That is a big discovery about Hanggeul. Thank you for teaching me about the history of your scipt. I think it\'s very interesting. t. Jane   \"What is the significance of Hanguel Day? Why is there a need to make it a national holiday in Korea?\" Hanguel is korean own languge. >>Hanguel is Korea\'s own script. The King Sejong made Hanguel for all the pepole in 1440\'s. >>The King Sejong made Hanguel for all the pepole in 1440. In 1440\'s Korean use chinese to write, only pepole of high calss could write and read chinese words. >>In 1440, Koreans use chinese to write, only pepole of high class could write and read chinese words. there were many illiterate pepole at that time. >>There were many illiterate people at that time. Chinese words are so difficult and it is hard to learn. >>CORRECT! The King Sejong decided to make koreans\' own languge which is easy to learn and make all the people to write and read. >>The King Sejong decided to make Koreas\' own script which is easy to learn and made all the people learn to write and read. We all Koreans are pride of Hanguel becasue it is unique and scientific. >>All of us Koreans are proud of Hanguel becasue it is unique and scientific. Anybody can write and read Hanguel within 3days. >>Anybody can write and read Hanguel within 3 days. A few of countries which don\'t have languges to write and read are learning Hangueal and also use Hanguel already. >>CORRECT! I think the King Sejong gave us too easy languge to us, that\'s the reason Korean think that English is difficult to learn. >>I think the King Sejong gave us an easy script, that\'s the reason Koreans think that English is difficult to learn. I wonder suddenly who makes English. >>I suddenly wonder who made English.

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