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2013-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.smaller 2.bigger 3.more common 4.fewer 5.more clever 6.more narrow 7.more quickly 8.worse 9.better 10.quicker There are a lot of sea animals in my fish tank. "Sea starfish","Warm",and small shrimps,some corals and "Sea snail" I guess that my fish tank is fulling of sea animals.

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A fabulous Friday Tom I want to commend you for doing a great job this week. You did your best to express your thoughts and you were open for corrections. Keep it up! Amazing job! You got a perfect score! I think comparatives is really easy for you, am I right? Oh! I am sure that you are really having a great time taking good care of your fishes. I know that your fish tank is really colorful.^^ I hope that you will have a great weekend with your family. See you on Monday! Take Care!Teacher Nina   1.smaller >> Correct!  2.bigger >> Correct!  3.more common >> Correct!  4.fewer >> less 5.more clever >> Correct!  / cleverer 6.more narrow >> Correct!  / narrower7.more quickly >> Correct!  / quicker 8.worse >> Correct!  9.better >> Correct!  10.quicker>> Correct!   There are a lot of sea animals in my fish tank. >> Correct!   >> OR: There are a lot of sea creatures in my fish tank.\"Sea starfish\",\"Warm\",and small shrimps,some corals and \"Sea snail\" >> The sea animals that are in my fish tank are a \"sea starfish\", a \"Warm\", small shrimps, some corals and a \"sea snail\". >> OR: The sea creatures that are found in my fish tank are a \"sea starfish\", a \"Warm\", small shrimps, some corals and a \"sea snail\".I guess that my fish tank is fulling of sea animals. >> I guess my fish tank is full of sea animals. >> OR: I guess my fish tank is already full of sea creatures.

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