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2013-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1. driving to school Many students think he is a rich when he drives to school because driving to school is unusual at that time. 2. making excuses Just say I'm sorry before making excuses when you make a mistake. 3. laughing Make something fun you can laugh, laughing makes your daily life happier. 4. baking chocolate chip cookies Baking chocolate chip cookie for him is really happy things to think all day. 5. cheating Cheating on her makes me feeling guilty, so I decide I won't ever do it again.

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Nice to see your compositions, Mr [이름]^^ Ha! Ha! I miss checking these~ However, I am so sad not to hear from you for a few days T^T 1. driving to school Many students think he is a rich when he drives to school because driving to school is unusual at that time.>>Many students thought he\' s rich when he drove to school because it was unusual at that time.2. making excuses Just say I\'m sorry before making excuses when you make a mistake.>>CORRECT!3. laughing Make something fun you can laugh, laughing makes your daily life happier.>>Make something fun you can laugh about, for laughing makes your daily life happier.4. baking chocolate chip cookies Baking chocolate chip cookie for him is really happy things to think all day.>>Baking chocolate chip cookies for him is  giving him happy thoughts to think about all day.5. cheating Cheating on her makes me feeling guilty, so I decide I won\'t ever do it again. >>Cheating on her makes me feeling guilty, so I have decided I won\'t ever do it again.    

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