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2013-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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last summer vacation is the most memorable.Because it is the present age. I want to tell you all of my vacation.But your question is the most memorable vacation you ever took and why. So I pick the last summer vacayion.Anyway last summer vacation is impression on me. Because there were a lot of fun memory.I will tell you about my fun memory today.^^

강사 첨삭

A cool Tuesday to you Tom!! Thank you for doing your homework and making your essay a little bit longer!  Yipee! I really appreciate your effort and also for those wonderful stories you share everyday. You were able to compose good sentences today! Amazing! Keep up the good work! However, we still need to enhance your vocabulary skills. It will help you compose complex sentences in the future. I know you can do it!  Can\'t wait to talk to you and hear the story about your summer vacation. See you in class! Take Care! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina last summer vacation is the most memorable. >> Last summer vacation was the most memorable one for me. >> OR: My vacation last summer was the most memorable one for me. Because it is the present age. >> Did you mean: It\'s because it happened recently. >> OR: It is because that vacation happened recently.I want to tell you all of my vacation. >> Did you mean: I want to tell you about all of the vacation experiences I had. >> OR: I want to share all of the places I\'ve been to every vacation. But your question is the most memorable vacation you ever took and why. >> But your question was about the most memorable vacation I had and why.So I pick the last summer vacayion. >> So I picked the vacation I had last summer as my answer. >> OR: So I chose the vacation I had last summer. Anyway last summer vacation is impression on me. >> Anyway, last summer vacation left an impression to me. Because there were a lot of fun memory. >> It is because I had a lot of fun memories. I will tell you about my fun memory today.^^ >> I will tell you about those fun memories today. >> OR: I will tell you about the fun memories I had in class today.

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