Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope I have on christmas with my friends or boy friend in other country.
Any country is fine with me, but it will be better staying country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for christmas. It is such as Swiss, Finland, and Sweden. I think If I am in one of those countries, I can feel real christmas. It looks like christmas what I expect.
And I will be more excited than staying in my country.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Emily!
You answered your homework immediately and I want to thank you for the effort.
However, your answer didn\'t match the meaning of the question.
The questions asks about a situation that you wish that situation never happened.
I think you misinterpreted the thought.
Anyhow, the sentences you gave me are nearly perfect.
You just have to be aware of the common missing words like articles and also I provided few vocabulary that are more appropriate to the sentence.
If you have some questions, feel free to ask them tomorrow in class.
Have a great day and keep safe!
~~Teacher Erine~~
I hope I have on christmas with my friends or boy friend in other country.
>>I hope I have/spend Christmas with my friends or with my boyfriend in another country.Any country is fine with me, but it will be better staying country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for christmas. It is such as Swiss, Finland, and Sweden.
>>Any country is fine with me, but it will be better to stay in a country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for Christmas such as Switzerland/Swiss, Finland and Sweden.
I think If I am in one of those countries, I can feel real christmas.
>>I think if I am in one of those countries, I can feel the real Christmas season.
It looks like christmas what I expect.
>>It is the type of Christmas that I am expecting.And I will be more excited than staying in my country. >>Correct.
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