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2013-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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I hope I have on christmas with my friends or boy friend in other country. Any country is fine with me, but it will be better staying country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for christmas. It is such as Swiss, Finland, and Sweden. I think If I am in one of those countries, I can feel real christmas. It looks like christmas what I expect. And I will be more excited than staying in my country.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Emily! You answered your homework immediately and I want to thank you for the effort. However, your answer didn\'t match the meaning of the question. The questions asks about a situation that you wish that situation never happened. I think you misinterpreted the thought. Anyhow, the sentences you gave me are nearly perfect. You just have to be aware of the common missing words like articles and also I provided few vocabulary that are more appropriate to the sentence. If you have some questions, feel free to ask them tomorrow in class. Have a great day and keep safe! ~~Teacher Erine~~   I hope I have on christmas with my friends or boy friend in other country. >>I hope I have/spend Christmas with my friends or with my boyfriend in another country.Any country is fine with me, but it will be better staying country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for christmas. It is such as Swiss, Finland, and Sweden. >>Any country is fine with me, but it will be better to stay in a country which I can see snow and a lot of decoration for Christmas such as Switzerland/Swiss, Finland and Sweden. I think If I am in one of those countries, I can feel real christmas. >>I think if I am in one of those countries, I can feel the real Christmas season. It looks like christmas what I expect. >>It is the type of Christmas that I am expecting.And I will be more excited than staying in my country. >>Correct.

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