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2013-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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1haven't 2.do 3.Did 4.Are 5.does 6.are 7.didn't 8.have 9.Did 10.Are The storm is in Philippines?? Maybe, I can get a sea anemone named "Carpet Anemone" or "rose Anemone" You can search about it. They are eat freeze Manila clam and shrimp. I'm nervous.Because I can buy a anemone!!

강사 첨삭

A nice Wednesday afternooon Tom! How was your day? It\'s the third day of the week again! Awesome! You just missed one item.!! Yipee! I am proud of you because you are really improving! Keep going! Express your thoughts and don\'t be afraid to commit mistakes. Can you tell me more about the clam and fish? I am curious about it. See you later in class! Teacher Nina   1. haven\'t >> Correct! 2.do >> Correct! 3.Did >> Correct! 4.Are >> Correct! 5.does >> Correct! 6.are >> Correct! 7.didn\'t >> Correct! 8.have >> haven\'t 9.Did >> Correct! 10.Are >> Correct! The storm is in Philippines?? >> Did you mean: Is there a storm in the Philippines?Maybe, I can get a sea anemone named \"Carpet Anemone\" or \"rose Anemone\" >> Correct! ( Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence. >> OR: Maybe I can get a sea anemone called \"Carpet Anemone\" or \"Rose Anemone\".You can search about it. >> Correct! >> OR: You can search about it on the internet. They are eat freeze Manila clam and shrimp. >> Did you mean: They eat frozen clam and shrimp. >> OR: They eat frozen clams and shrimps that are from Manila.I\'m nervous. Because I can buy a anemone!! >> I\'m nervous because I can buy an anemone. >> OR: I feel nervous. It is because I can buy an anemone.

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