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2013-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Talk about how technology has changed in your life. Digital life in the radiologic department. I'm a radiologist. I interpreted the radiologic images like X-ray, CT, MRI, and ultrasonography. Ultil about 2000 year, we've printed the images by films and we should see them through lighting view-box. After 2000 years, digital technology had made progress in the all of the our lives and radiologic department had be affected, too. Instead of disappearing of printed films, we had seen the images through computer monitor. We didn't need to print the films and hang up them on the view-box any longer. As soon as the patient gets the x-ray, we can see the image. This progress is very simple and don't need the time. Digitialized image, we call that PACS system.

강사 첨삭

Hey, you did a great job today!^^ I like how you started your paragraph..I guess that\'s your title.. I just want you to check on your sentence construction okay^^ I believe you can do better than this ,,^^ So keep on striving T.Kelly Here are my corrections for you: Digital life in the radiologic department. >>CORRECTI\'m a radiologist. >>CORRECT  I interpreted the radiologic images like X-ray, CT, MRI, and ultrasonography. >>I interpret radiologic images like X-ray, CT, MRI, and ultrasonography.  Ultil about 2000 year, we\'ve printed the images by films and we should see them through lighting view-box. >> By the year 2000, we  print the images by films and see them through the use of a lighting view-box. After 2000 years, digital technology had made progress in the all of the our lives and radiologic department had be affected, too. >>After 2000 years, digital technology has made progress that influenced  our lives including the  radiologic department .Instead of disappearing of printed films, we had seen the images through computer monitor. >>Instead of using printed films, we can now see the images through the computer monitor. We didn\'t need to print the films and hang up them on the view-box any longer. >>We don\'t need to print the films and hang it up on the view-box any longer.As soon as the patient gets the x-ray, we can see the image. >>CORRECT or As soon as the patient gets the x-ray, we can see the result. This progress is very simple and don\'t need the time. >>This process is very simple and quick.Digitialized image, we call that PACS system. >This is what we call as the PACS system.

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