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2013-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. The bridge in the park was repaired. I made another sentence using passive tense.: The bridge being repaired so far have made traffic jam in the moning commute time. 2. The children's playground has been damaged again. :My car was damaged due to the traffic accident. 3. The bus timetable was changed any time. Unchanged attitude at any situation is required in the service field. 4. My brother was discharged from hospital yesterday. Tommy was discharged by his frequent lateness. 5. I was informed by my lawyer of the changes to the contract. I was informed by company I applied for of the announcement of pass.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jo! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing this. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ 1. The bridge in the park was repaired.>> The bridge in the park _has just been repaired_. I made another sentence using passive tense.: >> I made another sentence using the passive voice. The bridge being repaired so far have made traffic jam in the moning commute time. >> The bridge which is being repaired has caused traffic jam in the morning during the commuting time.2. The children\'s playground has been damaged again. >> Correct :My car was damaged due to the traffic accident.>> Correct 3. The bus timetable was changed any time. >> The bus timetable _was always being changed_. Unchanged attitude at any situation is required in the service field.>> Correct 4.My brother was discharged from hospital yesterday. >> Correct Tommy was discharged by his frequent lateness.>> Tommy was discharged because of his frequent tardiness.5. I was informed by my lawyer of the changes to the contract.>> Correct I was informed by company I applied for of the announcement of pass. >> I was informed by the company I applied for that I passed the qualifications.  

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