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2013-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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What type of music do you like to listen to and can actually relieve you from stress? i like music pop, pork [이름] , korea [이름], something ,,. i like listening korea ballad music quite music make relax to me some time i need to take rest or some calm my self when i work hard or brake up with some one i play some music and l lie my bed or sofa the music make feel happy and relax some one said in Hispanic "music is the madison of a trouble mind"

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Hello there! Yes, music is really good for relaxing. It makes your mind settled. It\'s good to know that you are one of those who appreciated music. I loved music as well...I used to it at work and at home. And also when I am having a long trip. It is very helpful to me. Thank you for sharing. Have a day! T=Hannah=)   What type of music do you like to listen to and can actually relieve you from stress?>> What type of music do you like to listen, and it can relieve you from stress?i like music pop, pork [이름] , korea [이름], something ,,. >> I like pop music such as pork [이름]s and korean [이름]s i like listening korea ballad music>> I like listening korean ballad music quite music make relax to me >> Soft music can make me relax.some time i need to take rest or some calm my self >>Sometimes, I need to take a rest calmly.when i work hard or brake up with some one >> I do this when I get tired of worked and even when someone broke my heart.i play some music and l lie my bed or sofa >> I played some music while lying on my bed or in the sofathe music make feel happy and relax >> The music makes me feel happy and relax.some one said in Hispanic \"music is the madison of a trouble mind\" >> A Hispanic people said \" Music is the Madison of a trouble mind.\"

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