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2013-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.may 2.could 3.Can 4.may 5.could 6.can't 7.could Can you remember when I was going to the Lotte Hotel? Today I will tell you that the food of Hotel. First I ate baebeque and steaks. I also ate some bowl of shrimp,and rice. They were very smooth and delicious. I ate roast beef and baked potatoes, finally ,I ate grilled a lobster. They were very nutty. I ate some cookies.The cookies were crunch and nutty!

강사 첨삭

An exciting Friday to you Tom! You impressed me again today! Congratulations! You just missed one item. Wow! Keep up the good work and don\'t forget to learn more expressions in English. After I read your essay, I want to eat steak. Hahahaha! I know that you really enjoyed the food that you ate. Let\'s talk more about this later in class. Teacher Nina   1.may >> CORRECT!2.could >> CORRECT!3.Can >> CORRECT!4.may >> CORRECT!5.could >> MAY 6.can\'t >> CORRECT!7.could>> CORRECT!Can you remember when I was going to the Lotte Hotel? >> Do you still remember when I went to Lotte Hotel?>> OR: Do you still remember the time I went to Lotte Hotel?Today I will tell you that the food of Hotel. >> I will tell you about the food at the hotel today.First I ate baebeque and steaks. >> First, I ate barbecue and steak. >> OR: I had barbecue and steak for my first meal. I also ate some bowl of shrimp,and rice. >> I also ate a bowl of shrimp and rice.They were very smooth and delicious. >> The foods were very smooth and delicious. I ate roast beef and baked potatoes, finally ,I ate grilled a lobster. >> I ate roast beef, baked potatoes and finally I also ate a grilled lobster. They were very nutty. >> The foods were very nutty. >> OR: The foods served were full of flavors.I ate some cookies. >> Correct!The cookies were crunch and nutty! >> Correct!

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