Homework

2013-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Ladies and gentlemen. Here ____ the news.-> is 2) Where ____ my jeans? -> are 3) Further information ____ available in the office. -> is 4) The stairs ____ over there, Sir. -> are 5) The furniture in our classroom ____ uncomfortable. -> is <composition> When I chat on the phone with my friends, I usually talk about movies and books. Since my friends and I like to watch movies and read books, we talk about the movies that we watched. I have many friends who are housewives, so they usually talk about their children. I also talk about my difficulty and problem and my friends give me some advice and comfort. Chatting with friends on the phone always helps me to relieve stress and to make me happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

A cool Monday morning:)

It\'s good to know that you have some friends you can count on in times of trouble.

A friendly ear can be the best thing a person can have.

Have a fun day!^^

~~T. Chloe^^

 1) Ladies and gentlemen. Here ____ the news.-> is

>>Correct!
2) Where ____ my jeans? -> are

>>Correct!
3) Further information ____ available in the office. -> is

>>Correct!
4) The stairs ____ over there, Sir. -> are

>>Correct!
5) The furniture in our classroom ____ uncomfortable. -> is
>>Correct!
<composition>
When I chat on the phone with my friends, I usually talk about movies and books.

>>Correct!

>>When I chat on the phone with my friends, we usually talk about movies and books.
Since my friends and I like to watch movies and read books, we talk about the movies that we watched.

 >>Correct!
I have many friends who are housewives, so they usually talk about their children.

>>Correct!
I also talk about my difficulty and problem and my friends give me some advice and comfort.

 >>I also talk about my difficulties and problems and my friends give me some advice and comfort.
Chatting with friends on the phone always helps me to relieve stress and to make me happy.

>>Correct!^^ Or [to relieve me from stress]

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