Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey! How was your day? I hope your doing great!
I always have a great time speaking with you in class just as much as I enjoy checking your homework.
I read your composition and it\'s great to read about it. I just want you to know a writing tip. I hope you will write your next compositions using only one tense of the verb. It will help you gain consistency in your writing and it would also make your writing feel and sound better.^^
I hope you try this tip next time. Speak with you again soon.
T. Chloe^^
a. It seems to me that we\'ve had ______ assignments in English this term.
-> many
>>CORRECT!
b. How ______ material can we be expected to read in one week?
-> much
>>CORRECT!
c. ______ books are not in the library.
-> Many
>>CORRECT!
d. I\'ve had ______ headaches already because of stress.
-> much
>>MANY
e. ______ depression can be attributed to being overworked
-> Much
>>CORRECT!
<composition>
Last weekend, I went to see a play names the man and the woman with my friend.
>> Last weekend, I went to see a play entitled, \"The Man and The Woman\", with my friend.
It was a love story of a man and a woman.
>>It was a love story between a man and a woman.
The couple loves each other but they can\'t express their love. So they don\'t know how much they love.
>>The couple loves each other but they couldn\'t express their feelings; so, they don\'t know how much they love each other.
After many times of misunderstanding, they finally knew their love.
>> After a lot of misunderstandings, they finally knew of their love for one another.
It ended happy.
>>It ended happily.^^
I really understand the situation.
>>CORRECT, good job. Let\'s try and write our sentences with only one tense, okay? Since you used the past tense in the beginning of your composition let\'s write the rest of your sentences in the past tense.
>>I really understood the situation.
I had a similar situation.
>>CORRECT!^^
So I had a very good time.
>>CORRECT!
>>I had a really good time.
>>I had a great time.^^
I felt like an actress of the play during the time.
>>It felt as if I were the actress in the play.^^
After the play, my friend and I had a dinner with some alcohol saying the play.
>>After the play, my friend and I had dinner and drank alcohol, and talked about the play.^^
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