homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Some novels make me wisdom.
Scientific books give me imformation.But some books don't help me,ike comic books.
Comic book doesn't give me more imformation or wisdom.
If i can't keep reading many comic books I can't make a thinking.
강사 첨삭
A fun Monday to you TOM!
Thank you for sending me your essay.
I hope that you had a marvelous time with your family last weekend.
How often do you read books? Do you learn new words when you read books?
You did a nice job with your composition. Good!
I hope that you will continue in reading books to gain more knowledge.
I know you can do it! I\'ll see you in class!
Teacher Nina
Some novels make me wisdom.
>> Some novels give me wisdom.
Scientific books give me imformation.
>> Correct
>> OR: Science books give me information.
>> OR: Scientific books provide infomation.
But some books don\'t help me,ike comic books.
>> Correct {Spelling check: like ^^ )
>> OR: But some books don\'t help me, like comic books.
>> Some books are not useful for me, like comic books.Comic book doesn\'t give me more imformation or wisdom.
>> Comic books don\'t give me information or wisdom.
>> OR: Comic books don\'t provide information and wisdom that I need.If i can\'t keep reading many comic books I can\'t make a thinking.
>> Did you mean: If I keep on reading many comic books, I can\'t think naturally.
>> OR: If I keep on reading many comic books, I can\'t have good ideas.
>> OR: If I keep on reading a lot of comic books, I can\'t learn new words.
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