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2013-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Some novels make me wisdom. Scientific books give me imformation.But some books don't help me,ike comic books. Comic book doesn't give me more imformation or wisdom. If i can't keep reading many comic books I can't make a thinking.

강사 첨삭

A fun Monday to you TOM! Thank you for sending me your essay. I hope that you had a marvelous time with your family last weekend. How often do you read books? Do you learn new words when you read books? You did a nice job with your composition. Good! I hope that you will continue in reading books to gain more knowledge. I know you can do it! I\'ll see you in class! Teacher Nina   Some novels make me wisdom. >> Some novels give me wisdom. Scientific books give me imformation. >> Correct >> OR: Science books give me information. >> OR: Scientific books provide infomation. But some books don\'t help me,ike comic books. >> Correct {Spelling check: like ^^ ) >> OR: But some books don\'t help me, like comic books. >> Some books are not useful for me, like comic books.Comic book doesn\'t give me more imformation or wisdom. >> Comic books don\'t give me information or wisdom. >> OR: Comic books don\'t provide information and wisdom that I need.If i can\'t keep reading many comic books I can\'t make a thinking. >> Did you mean: If I keep on reading many comic books, I can\'t think naturally. >> OR:  If I keep on reading many comic books, I can\'t have good ideas. >> OR: If I keep on reading a lot of comic books, I can\'t learn new words.

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