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2013-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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famile is broken by many reasons. what do you think the reasons? we have liveing a busy life. so we can't care your famile sometime we have think about only ourself we world very fast is chainging. many people think money the best important than famile we have love ambition.money, success , power these day

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A wonderful Tuesday to you! How have you been? I hope you\'re doing just fine. Just keep practicing and you will be learning the target language in a snap! Practice by communicating with your friends and family using English, or practice in front of the mirror. I can assure you that it works! Keep it up and take care always^^ ~T.Hannah Here are my corrections for you: famile is broken by many reasons. >>A family can be broken in many reasons.what do you think the reasons? >> What do you think are the reasons?we have liveing a busy life. >> We are living a busy life. >>OR we are being busy.so we can\'t care your famile sometime >> That\'s why we were not able to take care of our families.we have think about only ourself >> We have only thought about ourselves.we world very fast is chainging. >> Our world is changing very fast.many people think money the best important than famile >> Many people think that money is more important than their families.we have love ambition.money, success , power these day >> I think ambition, money, sucess, and power were more important to people these days.

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