Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Every Friday HE goes to the club.
->subject
2) Emma often arrives late AT SCHOOL.
-> place
1) what / Angela / like / for breakfast / does
-> What does Angela like for breakfast?
2) who / the window / broke
->Who broke the window?
I worked on a new customer management system project. It was memorable because I had a very hard time but I got a big success. I worked with many software engineers in the outsourcing companies. I was so difficult in working with many kinds of people. I had many conversations with them to resolve the problem. At that time, I worked overtime a lot and I finished my project well before due date. When the project was completed, I felt really proud of myself.
One of my favorite website is ‘Naver’. Naver is one of the most famous portal sites in Korea. First thing after I enter Naver is to check my email. By visiting the website, I can read news and interesting cartoons.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for sending in your homework and sharing something aboutthe project you had before. Well, I know that it is quite a difficult time dealing with different kinds of people but that would help you manage your project and yourself as well. Great job on that!
I do hope you will keep that up..
Take care always and have a great day..
~Teacher Chloe~
1) Every Friday HE goes to the club.->subject>>correct2) Emma often arrives late AT SCHOOL.-> place>>correct1) what / Angela / like / for breakfast / does-> What does Angela like for breakfast?
>>correct2) who / the window / broke->Who broke the window?>>correctI worked on a new customer management system project.
>>correct
Observe proper capitalization of propoer nouns Eg. New Customer Management System Project
It was memorable because I had a very hard time but I got a big success.
>>correct
OR: It was memorable because I had a hadr time doing that but I succeeded.
I worked with many software engineers in the outsourcing companies.
>>correct
I was so difficult in working with many kinds of people. I had many conversations with them to resolve the problem.
>>It was so difficult working with many kinds of people.I had many conversations with them to resolve the problem.
At that time, I worked overtime a lot and I finished my project well before due date.
>>correct
OR: I worked over time a lot at that time and I finished my project well before the due date.
When the project was completed, I felt really proud of myself.>>correctOne of my favorite website is ‘Naver’.
>>One of my favorite websites is the Naver.
Naver is one of the most famous portal sites in Korea.
>>correct
First thing after I enter Naver is to check my email.
>>correct
By visiting the website, I can read news and interesting cartoons.
>>correct
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