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I live on the second floor of twelve-story studio apartment. My apartment is the one-room style. There are a large room with built-in closets and a good washroom. My room has a large window too. My apartment was built two years ago. So it is very clean and modern. I am the first person that lives in my apartment. I like my apartment so that I will live for a long time. When I watch a romantic comedy movie, I feel like being a main actress of the movie. I feel better after the movie is finished. The most memorable movie I have seen is ‘One fine day’. The first time that I watched this movie was when I was a college student. I have watched this movie several times. In the movie, there are the divorced man and woman. They are an architect and a newspaper columnist. They have children but they cannot take care of their children because they are very busy. They meet one morning when they cannot take care of their children whole day. They help each other and they get loved.

A wonderful Tuesday to you! I can actually visualize your apartment through this awesome essay that you wrote! I want to live in an apartment like yours one day, where I can watch as many movies as I can. Haha! Anyway, I hope you\'re doing just fine and I am looking forward to talk to you again. Always take care and take time to practice, because English time is a fun time! \'The more that you read, the more things you will know. The more that you learn, the more places you\'ll go.\' ― Dr. [Name] ~T. Chloe Here are your corrections: I live on the second floor of twelve-story studio apartment. >> I live on the second floor of a twelve-story studio apartment. My apartment is the one-room style. >> My apartment is a one-room style. There are a large room with built-in closets and a good washroom. >> There is a large room with built-in closets and a good washroom. My room has a large window too. >> CORRECT My apartment was built two years ago. >> CORRECT So it is very clean and modern. >> CORRECT I am the first person that lives in my apartment. >> I am the first person that lived in my apartment. >>OR I am the first person that lived in this apartment. I like my apartment so that I will live for a long time. >> I like my apartment, that\'s why I am going to stay here for a long time.When I watch a romantic comedy movie, I feel like being a main actress of the movie. >> Everytime I watch a romantic comedy movie, I feel like I am the main actress of the movie. I feel better after the movie is finished. >> CORRECT >>OR I feel better after watching the movie. The most memorable movie I have seen is ‘One fine day’. >> The most memorable  movie that I have seen is One Fine Day.The first time that I watched this movie was when I was a college student. >> I was a college student when I first watched this movie. I have watched this movie several times. >> CORRECTIn the movie, there are the divorced man and woman. >> In the movie, there is a divorced man and woman >>OR In the movie, there is a divorced couple. They are an architect and a newspaper columnist. >> One is an architect, the other is a newspaper columnist. They have children but they cannot take care of their children because they are very busy. >> They have children but they weren\'t able to take care of them since they were very busy. They meet one morning when they cannot take care of their children whole day. >> Do you mean: One morning, they realized that they cannot take care of their children the entire day. They help each other and they get loved. >>Do you mean:They helped each other in taking care of their children and in return, their children loved them more.